Lysander_Works
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As the name implies, I need to have a chapter examined (edit suggestions more than a review). I have not created a new chapter for quite some time and feel like I'm rusty. Not sure how well I did as a result. So, let me know what you think. I'm more than happy to do the same in return.
Note: One chapter only. I will only do two chapters if the total length is under 4K words.
Note 2: The link to the file I'm posting is time sensitive. If it expires, please let me know. I will not be renewing it after this review has been fulfilled.
Note 3: The chapter is not a "first" chapter by any means, so it's okay if you need additional context.
Note 4: I have yet to think of a chapter title on this one. If you think of it first, let me know. Not a requirement.
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Note: One chapter only. I will only do two chapters if the total length is under 4K words.
Note 2: The link to the file I'm posting is time sensitive. If it expires, please let me know. I will not be renewing it after this review has been fulfilled.
Note 3: The chapter is not a "first" chapter by any means, so it's okay if you need additional context.
Note 4: I have yet to think of a chapter title on this one. If you think of it first, let me know. Not a requirement.
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