Hi, what's up? Why are you here? Well, Since you are here then help me out. I have been writing and editing the chapters of my story "The Barriard" many times. But, still I Don't know why am I getting reviews of 3 to 4 stars only(On Royal Road). Can you point out somethings which can help the story improve?[And for all my readers on SH. I have Updated all the chapters and the story has improved very much than before. So, you can once again check it out!]