Juia_Darkcrest
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The Narrator | Scribble Hub
I have the prologue done, 13k words.
The main premise is Earth was hit with a comet with only a years prep time. Most of the population dead.
However, a being in the Omniverse, known as 'The Narrator' had thrown his dart at the next human he was going to give a system, and decided to step in a bit and make some tweaks. All at the behest of 'The Viewers' from the omniverse.
This will follow the MC James King, a 38 year old man, a former underwater welder, as he struggles to survive in this post apocalyptic world.
I have made it no secret that I write stories with smut, but there is no smut in this yet. I would like some feedback from other authours on what they think of the premise of this work.
Please if you have a bit of time, give it a look over, I would like some honest feedback.
JD
I have the prologue done, 13k words.
The main premise is Earth was hit with a comet with only a years prep time. Most of the population dead.
However, a being in the Omniverse, known as 'The Narrator' had thrown his dart at the next human he was going to give a system, and decided to step in a bit and make some tweaks. All at the behest of 'The Viewers' from the omniverse.
This will follow the MC James King, a 38 year old man, a former underwater welder, as he struggles to survive in this post apocalyptic world.
I have made it no secret that I write stories with smut, but there is no smut in this yet. I would like some feedback from other authours on what they think of the premise of this work.
Please if you have a bit of time, give it a look over, I would like some honest feedback.
JD