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[Orezstudio]

She flipped my World

She Flipped My World

She Flipped My World -By DZero John never believed in fate—until he saw her. It was love at first sight when John laid eyes on Lily outside a corporate building. Just as he worked up the courage to confess his feelings, fate turned...

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[Alski]

My feedback for you: Learn to link.

Congratulations ?

 

[Dec]

Super short chapters that read like GPT written them. And looking at how you have written the title of your post, I'm fairly certain of it.

So yeah, I'm gonna pass.

 

[Spacerunner357]

Good idea sharing here
Have a great and good day all

 

[MasterY001]

I've written chapters longer than your whole story. No AI, no co-writers, just raw, solitary talent (and a comfy seat cushion).

 

[Placeholder]

Site rules: It's ok to use ai for grammar checking. It is sort of ok to use it for world building and improv-workshopping, if you rework it enough that it is your work.

Just dumping chatgpt output to a chapter is a no-no.

 

[StoneInky]

At least this person doesn't deny it.

It's okay. Just go back and rewrite it in your own words. Either that, or. Don't. Ask. For. A. Review.

 

[Valmond]

At least this person doesn't deny it.

It's okay. Just go back and rewrite it in your own words. Either that, or. Don't. Ask. For. A. Review.

Must be the unfiltered version of CGPT.

 

[MasterY001]

Yo, I just realized I completely missed the opportunity to make an "and I flipped you off" joke.

Goddammit! Why is my brain always 2 steps too slow!?

 

[Bitmaker]

Yo, I just realized I completely missed the opportunity to make an "and I flipped you off" joke.

Goddammit! Why is my brain always 2 steps too slow!?

"Two steps behind... I'm always two steps behind"

 

[aurifex]

I wonder if these AI degens genuinely think their slop passes for real writing. It's so painfully obvious. Have they never opened a book? I'm embarrassed for them

 

[Rhaps]

I wonder if these AI degens genuinely think their slop passes for real writing. It's so painfully obvious. Have they never opened a book? I'm embarrassed for them

There are things AIs cannot compromise, those things are also the ones humans can compromise, break, and dance on.

I mean, as of writing, I effectively glorified the Holocaust

 

[RepresentingDesire]

There are things AIs cannot compromise, those things are also the ones humans can compromise, break, and dance on.

I mean, as of writing, I effectively glorified the Holocaust

Indeed, Ais can be programmed to not say somethings

 

[Placeholder]

> I mean, as of writing, I effectively glorified the Holocaust

In the absence of context, you're saying something provocative and unpleasant. Cruel, rather.

Enough so that I'm not interested in more context or justification.

 

[Macha]

The blurb remind me of this.

 

[CharlesEBrown]

I wonder if these AI degens genuinely think their slop passes for real writing. It's so painfully obvious. Have they never opened a book? I'm embarrassed for them

Oh, I'm sure they've opened some awful, banal books - ones written in "urban speak" or ones that only got published due to a publisher seeing a popular theme or concept in them and not looking at the writing, or the Twilight novels....