Check out this novel if it's good and anything that lacks in this novel please give me a feedback

Orezstudio

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She flipped my World
 
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Super short chapters that read like GPT written them. And looking at how you have written the title of your post, I'm fairly certain of it.

So yeah, I'm gonna pass.
 

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Site rules: It's ok to use ai for grammar checking. It is sort of ok to use it for world building and improv-workshopping, if you rework it enough that it is your work.

Just dumping chatgpt output to a chapter is a no-no.
 

StoneInky

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At least this person doesn't deny it.

It's okay. Just go back and rewrite it in your own words. Either that, or. Don't. Ask. For. A. Review.
 

MasterY001

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Yo, I just realized I completely missed the opportunity to make an "and I flipped you off" joke.

Goddammit! Why is my brain always 2 steps too slow!?
 

aurifex

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I wonder if these AI degens genuinely think their slop passes for real writing. It's so painfully obvious. Have they never opened a book? I'm embarrassed for them
 

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I wonder if these AI degens genuinely think their slop passes for real writing. It's so painfully obvious. Have they never opened a book? I'm embarrassed for them
There are things AIs cannot compromise, those things are also the ones humans can compromise, break, and dance on.

I mean, as of writing, I effectively glorified the Holocaust
 

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> I mean, as of writing, I effectively glorified the Holocaust

In the absence of context, you're saying something provocative and unpleasant. Cruel, rather.

Enough so that I'm not interested in more context or justification.
 

Macha

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The blurb remind me of this.
 

CharlesEBrown

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I wonder if these AI degens genuinely think their slop passes for real writing. It's so painfully obvious. Have they never opened a book? I'm embarrassed for them
Oh, I'm sure they've opened some awful, banal books - ones written in "urban speak" or ones that only got published due to a publisher seeing a popular theme or concept in them and not looking at the writing, or the Twilight novels....
 
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