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[knightessDragontle]

The beginning are full of mysteries so it will be slow and long :) I hope you enjoy. This is a historical fiction starting in Ming before the female lead starts her journey to Joseon

The Lost Princess’ Descendant: The First Bloom

Book 1: The First Bloom *** This is a raw release of a completed book. It's part of a fast-evolving series that I'm writing with momentum and passion. While the final polished version will come after the series is complete, the full story is here and ready for you to dive into....

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[Empress_Omnii]

Not sure I'll read it due to having the slightest preference for sapphics... but what does "late appearance for female AND male lead characters" mean?

 

[knightessDragontle]

Not sure I'll read it due to having the slightest preference for sapphics... but what does "late appearance for female AND male lead characters" mean?

I tried to make it short, but it means that the Female Lead and Male Lead will appear later in the story. Should I have written it better?

 

[Empress_Omnii]

I tried to make it short, but it means that the Female Lead and Male Lead will appear later in the story. Should I have written it better?

Who is the story following if they both appear late in the story? Or did you mean that they meet each other later on?
That or you have a poly or harem story..?

 

[knightessDragontle]

Who is the story following if they both appear late in the story? Or did you mean that they meet each other later on?
That or you have a poly or harem story..?

The story will follow Yun Yuhua, who is the female lead character. The male lead will appear later in the story because he is in Joseon. They will meet each other later on. No harem

 

[Empress_Omnii]

The story will follow Yun Yuhua, who is the female lead character. The male lead will appear later in the story because he is in Joseon. They will meet each other later on. No harem

As such I don't know why you say "late introduction of female AND... lead characters" if the story is following the character they won't be introduced late (except for a few edge cases).

You make it sound like the romance is between two separate characters, from the readers perspective the protagonist significant other will be the, in this case, male lead. But the protagonist isn't normally called the female/male lead, they are just considered the protagonist.

I would recommend something along the lines of "Late introduction of male lead" it likely is the briefest and most standard note for what you're writing. You don't need to explain it in more detail than that, but you can additionally say that it will be a slow romance. Yet only start considering if the romance is slow or not for once they meet. (For example a story where it takes 1200 chapters to meet the love interest and they fall in love in the next five chapters... is not a slow romance, the time it takes for the character introduction is irrelevant.)

 

[knightessDragontle]

As such I don't know why you say "late introduction of female AND... lead characters" if the story is following the character they won't be introduced late (except for a few edge cases).

You make it sound like the romance is between two separate characters, from the readers perspective the protagonist significant other will be the, in this case, male lead. But the protagonist isn't normally called the female/male lead, they are just considered the protagonist.

I would recommend something along the lines of "Late introduction of male lead" it likely is the briefest and most standard note for what you're writing. You don't need to explain it in more detail than that, but you can additionally say that it will be a slow romance. Yet only start considering if the romance is slow or not for once they meet. (For example a story where it takes 1200 chapters to meet the love interest and they fall in love in the next five chapters... is not a slow romance, the time it takes for the character introduction is irrelevant.)

Oh okay! I will change that. Thanks for the feedback <3

 

[Empress_Omnii]

Oh okay! I will change that. Thanks for the feedback <3

You don't need to say "male lead character" just "male lead" works.

 

[knightessDragontle]

You don't need to say "male lead character" just "male lead" works.

I believe I changed it :)