Good time of day, I hope everyone is doing well. If you don't mind, could you tell me if the character changed her mind too quickly about the benefits of anger in this chapter? (to avoid reading the entire chapter, use CTRL+F to find " pale orange hue " and then go until the end of the dialogue) https://www.scribblehub.com/read/51...ying-not-to-become-a-monster/chapter/1927733/
Can you tell me if the character changed her mind too quickly in this situation?
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Yes. Especially with the other guy interrupting.
Thank you! That's the best I can do for now, but I'll try to improve and create smoother character arcs in the future.