Can you lend me your eyes?

[Cherry_W_Hanako]

I've posted a fantasy novel on Scribble Hub a while back entitled Word Fu.
I haven't been getting much feedback on it so i'm not sure if i'm doing anything wrong or good.
Could you check it out and give me an honest feedback?

here is the link: Word Fu! | Scribble Hub

 

[Armored99]

Read the description, and upon seeing the main characters name I just kept thinking of this.

 

[greyblob]

Overwhelming and redundant.
Haven't read beyond the first chapter though.

 

[RepresentingCaution]

I'll read the first two chapters if you give me a one-star rating on each of my stories ?