Can someone give me some honest feedback?

[A-Random-Writer]

So, I've asked this before with my first chapter and I got some really solid feedback, but I only got a response about the first chapter so i was wanting to see if anyone could go read chapters 2-5 to see if they are any good. Thank you for hearing my request out.

Btw I have started to fix Chapter 1 but I'm going to implement the changes once i get the Chapter 4-8ish arc done.

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