Shido_kun
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This isn’t my first story. I’ve loved writing since middle school, but that passion grew even stronger when I entered high school ( mostly influenced by other authors and the way they bring their stories to life, which I truly admire. )
But as always I always write few chapter and abandon it and after few days i start another and like that I’ve repeated this cycle many times.
But I thought to make this story my first completed series, so I love to hear your feedback to complete this my so called first novel.
This story start as normal rom com but yeah I thought to put some interesting plot so that this can stand out (or you can say my imaginations)
and I also think that my chapter is kind of long ( way too long and chapter 2 is more long than chapter 1, i have writing chapter 2 but it has already beat chapter 1, I know i have to decrease the length but also i have to set things up for the next chapter, so I’m still working on finding the right balance. )
Anyway, if you have the time, I’d be grateful if you could read it and share your feedback.
And please don’t judge the names (I’m not very good at naming characters or novels
)
Our Promise Across The lifetimes
But as always I always write few chapter and abandon it and after few days i start another and like that I’ve repeated this cycle many times.
But I thought to make this story my first completed series, so I love to hear your feedback to complete this my so called first novel.
This story start as normal rom com but yeah I thought to put some interesting plot so that this can stand out (or you can say my imaginations)
and I also think that my chapter is kind of long ( way too long and chapter 2 is more long than chapter 1, i have writing chapter 2 but it has already beat chapter 1, I know i have to decrease the length but also i have to set things up for the next chapter, so I’m still working on finding the right balance. )
Anyway, if you have the time, I’d be grateful if you could read it and share your feedback.
And please don’t judge the names (I’m not very good at naming characters or novels
)Our Promise Across The lifetimes