Can someone give me some feedback on my novels

[A_the_king_of_all]

Like
The narration style:
Grammer:
Story structure:
The plot:
And anything more y'all want to add, as i am still a newbie writer (not even worthy of being a called a author tbh)

Also can y'all tell me which tags would suit them

The novels
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1779128/foundation-of-talents/
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1780220/crossing-path-of-nine-incarnations/