Can i have a honest review of volume two......?

[Deleted member 180663]

Greetings, it is I—hoshino.

With the end of volume two i want to know that how good it was.





Volume two starts on:Chapter 11
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Short summary of volume 1:

Spoiler: spolires on volume 1

Hoshino who is Mentaly unstable unalives himself infornt of his lover and gets reincarnated,then chose the fate of genocied, then he dies, again. Now he is back at were it all started, well not really,when he gets news that his parents died, then the orphanage, where act 2:<47 days of hell> begans. And at the end chapter he dies and gets transmigrated to another world where he is being dragged to a podium, where he gets behead.

Novel:

Beyond infinity

In a world where supernatural phenomena manifest from the raw intensity of human fears, desires, and emotions, I—Hoshino—have always carried a peculiar yearning: the desire to be hurt and to hurt others. This desire shaped my life, twisting it into something incomprehensible. In middle school...

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[Deleted member 180663]

But no one came.

 

[CharlesEBrown]

Barely made it through the prologue chapter so far... The writing is solid and clear, but sometimes a bit unpleasant and can be kind of dense to get through.

 

[Deleted member 180663]

Barely made it through the prologue chapter so far... The writing is solid and clear, but sometimes a bit unpleasant and can be kind of dense to get through.

Unpleasant like sad or depressing?

 

[CharlesEBrown]

Unpleasant like sad or depressing?

Yes.

 

[Deleted member 180663]

Yes.

.ohh. Then that's perfect. Cuase tragedy is the main genre.but strangely enough i only felt sad after two volumes.So i think it's not sad/dark enough and would be renewing it to make it sadder.

 

[CharlesEBrown]

Well... you need some light, some happy moments, to make the tragedy sharper. Otherwise, it just depresses the reader and they are likely to either give up or set it aside for a while before diving back in.