Can I get Feedback on the first 5-10 chapters

Cookiez_N_Potionz

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So far, writing this LitRPG has been pretty fun and I'm not gonna abandoned my story because that would suck. I already have the beginning, middle, and end all worked out. Getting opinions on my world-building and characters would be helpful too. Also, I think it's more character-driven than plot-driven. My character gets a system, goes on quests, and deals with drama.

 
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