Can anyone give me an objective overall feedback?

K_Jira

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I have just finished my first book here in SH. It's a 23 chapters long BL novella. This is the first time for me to actually finish a story and I'm kind of nervous about what people think about it. Honestly, I'm pretty satisfied myself and a bit proud for finishing it though slightly short. But I want an objective opinion about it overall.

It's a bit hard for me to write more than 30 chapters and I found this amount of word count/chapters are perfect for me. Should I continue writing novellas like this? But I'm worried if my story was a bit too fast-paced or there are many plotholes inside.

Here's the link to my story: Heaven's Will

Appreciate your help in advance ☺️
 
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