Build character for me

[Haku45]

Someone has already done this. but I want it in my story. Make me a character. I will have a tournament arc, and I want to take your fighter. I need a race, history, appearance, personality, abilities and a soul keeper.

The soul keeper is something like Pokemon x fate champions. They can have their own features in appearance but partially change due to the owner. But they have their own abilities during life. It can be like fireball. Or something really serious like reality control. But they require mana from the owner to implement the abilities.

You can write anything regardless of the boundaries. If I like it, I will take the character, but I can probably change something if they stand out too much in my plot.

 

[Sergeandgreen]

Do you want a backgroundstory as well?

 

[Sergeandgreen]

and can his power be anything? Could it be a cultivator?

 

[Haku45]

and can his power be anything? Could it be a cultivator?

Yep whatever you want to do. Background too

 

[Sergeandgreen]

Name: Eamon (No family name)
Race: Human/Cultivator

Eamon was the son of a cultivator (Veretas) who almost reached immortality. Veretas was the most feared man in the world. He whipped out cities, sects, clans, and dynasties whenever someone did as much as look at him the wrong way. He made the world tremble in fear, and mothers told their kids horror stories about how he would take them if they didn't behave. But despite all his power, he still wasn't immortal. He hadn't grasped the power of time. So when he reached the last millennia of his long life, he began to wander the world once again in the hope of getting an inspiration or enlightenment to become immortal. During this last millenium, he accidentally became a father of twins (A rare type of birth among cultivators with reduced fertility). The mother, a servant of his, died during the birth. For 16 years, Veretas stayed with his sons and trained them. Veretas never had any children, despite his many affairs, so he trained them like he would train a disciple in the sect he had been the master of. So Eamon and his twin brother Valerion were trained to become killing machines before finally starting to cultivate. Two years later, Eamon forced the two of them to fight each other to death. At first, the two of them rejected this idea, but Veretas left them no choice. One of them would die, or both of them would. And despite their brotherly love and camaraderie, their will to survive, ingrained over their whole lives, was stronger, and so they fought. Eamon beat his twin after a long battle out of luck as the sun started to blind his brother while going down. Veretas forced Kaelen to absorb his brothers Mana and Soul with a ritual exclusive to twins. It added the affinities and Mana of one twin to the others with 99% efficacy, making the already supremely talented Eamon into a monster only seen once every few thousand years. Eamon traveled with his father for thirty years, getting trained/tortured before, out of nowhere, the enemies of his father ambushed them. All the leading forces of the three greatest powers had sent their strongest fighters to beat him. Veretas power ripped space open, transporting everyone except Kaelen into a deeper layer of reality. Only one person survived the fight. That survivor didn't know about Eamon, as he was to unimportant, so Eamon could travel the world relatively carefree. But his father's death had taught him a lesson. No matter how powerful you are, you live longer when no one knows you. And so he started to silently (he never leaves survivors, after revealing himself) become a powerhouse himself, by training his control over mana, studying his father's manuals to bend space, and by sacrificing other people to boost his already insane rate of growth. Now Eamon is three hundred years old. He had trained his body, mind, mana, and soul to the best of his ability and mastered many techniques. Be it swords, staffs, bows, spears, martial arts, or poisons. But as he prepared to advance his cultivation, he found a tome that taught him a secret art to create a clone. But to create a clone that is close to him in power (and doesn't weaken him in the creation process), he needs a body that has been prepared over a long time and has cultivated a similar or the same method as him. So he starts to look for promising disciples to create the necessary sacrifices to create his clones. By now, he has ten disciples, mostly orphans, who live in groups of two in the cultivation caves he prepared for them. But these disciples aren't to his satisfaction, so he starts to infiltrate righteous factions, either as an elder and teacher or as a disciple himself, to find one worthy of becoming his clones. The disciples only know about the other disciple who shares the cave with them, and don't know about Eamons plans.


So, all in all Eamon is a smart guy that stays undercover and waits for his opportunities with the grand goal of immortality. He uses the strategy of acting weak while being strong quite often. And because he always uses different weapons to kill his enemies there aren't even rumours about him.

 

[Sergeandgreen]

I hope that helps. If you want more, just say it.
And if you have more specifics regarding the world, i could integrate it into the next character. Because in this case i added a bit random bulshit to emphasize the powerscale.

 

[Theirl]

Name: Chadwick Bravo

Race: Human
History: Son of a magician(card tricks and such thing), he takes his fathers legacy(his life lessons very seriosly), his childhood was really rough because of his high admirantion for his father and people used to use his father to bully him calling a fake because of lack of mana to actually use spells by his father, after his father death chadwick decides to show the world the worth of a true magician using this childish tricks in combat to diverge the attention of people from his true attacks.
appearance: always using a tuxedo,blond,blue eyes, shining smile
personality: seems full of arrogance, selfsteem and a narcissist, but that all an act he is actually cold and cauculating, pridefull and has low selfsteem always trying to prove himself at the world, but when cornered will become reckless
ability: he can control light(not laser) and do some light shows he usually uses it to distract people while doing magic tricks, or use to blind people like a flash bang
soul keep: shadow(looks like am humanity from darksouls)
ability: shadow control it can control shadows his body counts as a shadow too so he can manipulate his body at will, shadows that is not the soul keeper use a really high amount of magic power

strategy: when the battle start he will do a magic trick to distract the audience and the opponent while the shadow create a clone(illusion) and will reduce its size they will try to seems invencible since the shadow(clone) is immatireal while the really really smal shadow will attack the oponent at the same time to seems the shadow(clone) can attack, if the strategy fails they will stop doing that and get back to normal size to save mana since chadwick doesnt have a lot, and will try to create oportunities using magic tricks and light shows and blinding its oponent, if all fail they will use the false sense of that they cannot materialize the shadows they control to try one last attack with all their mana

obs: when controlling its body it will try to make blades, whips and try to manipulate to dogde attacks since

feel free to modify anything u want!

 

[Sergeandgreen]

Oh, i forgot the soul keeper part. What is a soul keeper anyway?
Anyway, the soul keeper looks like a mummified/zombified version of himself or his twin.

 

[Empress_Omnii]

The soul keeper is something like Pokemon x fate champions. They can have their own features in appearance but partially change due to the owner. But they have their own abilities during life. It can be like fireball. Or something really serious like reality control. But they require mana from the owner to implement the abilities.

I've got nearly a character, but can you give an example or explain this differently. I want to get it right.
Edit: I think I've figured it out

 

[Jerynboe]

Elizabeth was born in a rural town to a single father (death by childbirth, naturally). He didn’t really know what else to do with her, so he trained her in his craft as a hunter and woodsman from the moment she was off of her all-milk diet.

She’s a cocky human tomboy who has the swagger of someone seven feet tall and the physique of a 12 year old boy. She keeps her muddy brown hair short; if she has access to a hair stylist she will get it cut nicely, but she’s perfectly happy to chop it off with a knife if it’s getting annoyingly long.

She’s perky and friendly by default, but relishes the chance to trash talk anyone. Especially when she’s in a competition, she likes to get a rise out of people because angry people make mistakes. Also it’s funny.

She uses a crossbow in combat, relying on stealth, positioning, and well placed shots. She’s kinda mid when it comes to hand to hand combat compared to professional warriors, but could certainly kick the ass of some rando at a pub. She’d vastly prefer hit and run tactics or an ambush over any kind of fair fight, and that’s most of what she uses her magic for. That, and the occasional robbery.

Her soul keeper is a cat, which became a catgirl after connecting with her. Her powers allow her to dampen energy. Light (do make darkness) and sound (to muffle noise) are easiest and what she uses most often, but she can also neutralize heat or even kinetic energy. That said, the less she can plan for it the more tiring it is. If she cancels her own kinetic energy in order to jump off a roof safely or turn on a dime, it’s a hell of a lot easier than, say, blocking an arrow.

She has a very good memory, so she will scan her surroundings, create an area of darkness, and reposition. Take a shot or make a jury rigged trap, then repeat on the next darkness bubble.

 

[Cipiteca396]

I need a race, history, appearance, personality, abilities and a soul keeper.

Race is Plant-kin. (Just my go to for these things.)

History: I don't know enough about your world to say a thing.

Appearance: Tall, Deep Green Skin, Bluish Green Hair, Gold Flowers and Eyes; Wears Black Ironwood Armor. Personality ranges from stoic to aggressive.

Abilities: Tank, aggressive melee fighter with a shield and halberd. Prefers to parry or block attacks, and will crowd enemies that try to attack allies. Has limited life magic, mostly for healing and restoring her armor. The rest of her mana goes to her (wth would you call a Kept Soul?).

Soul Keeper: A dryad. Can heal or strengthen her host or host's equipment. High DPS and DoT potential. She has a tendency to use poison or life magic to attack enemies, using spores, roots or thorny vines to entangle enemies and debuff them. Can also summon natural allies (Fae or Plants, but not animals). Ethereal, cannot make physical attacks or take physical damage. Tanned white skin, bright purple hair, blue eyes; wears minimal clothing 'for photosynthesis', but it's really just to tease mortals.

 

[Haku45]

Name: Eamon (No family name)
Race: Human/Cultivator

Eamon was the son of a cultivator (Veretas) who almost reached immortality. Veretas was the most feared man in the world. He whipped out cities, sects, clans, and dynasties whenever someone did as much as look at him the wrong way. He made the world tremble in fear, and mothers told their kids horror stories about how he would take them if they didn't behave. But despite all his power, he still wasn't immortal. He hadn't grasped the power of time. So when he reached the last millennia of his long life, he began to wander the world once again in the hope of getting an inspiration or enlightenment to become immortal. During this last millenium, he accidentally became a father of twins (A rare type of birth among cultivators with reduced fertility). The mother, a servant of his, died during the birth. For 16 years, Veretas stayed with his sons and trained them. Veretas never had any children, despite his many affairs, so he trained them like he would train a disciple in the sect he had been the master of. So Eamon and his twin brother Valerion were trained to become killing machines before finally starting to cultivate. Two years later, Eamon forced the two of them to fight each other to death. At first, the two of them rejected this idea, but Veretas left them no choice. One of them would die, or both of them would. And despite their brotherly love and camaraderie, their will to survive, ingrained over their whole lives, was stronger, and so they fought. Eamon beat his twin after a long battle out of luck as the sun started to blind his brother while going down. Veretas forced Kaelen to absorb his brothers Mana and Soul with a ritual exclusive to twins. It added the affinities and Mana of one twin to the others with 99% efficacy, making the already supremely talented Eamon into a monster only seen once every few thousand years. Eamon traveled with his father for thirty years, getting trained/tortured before, out of nowhere, the enemies of his father ambushed them. All the leading forces of the three greatest powers had sent their strongest fighters to beat him. Veretas power ripped space open, transporting everyone except Kaelen into a deeper layer of reality. Only one person survived the fight. That survivor didn't know about Eamon, as he was to unimportant, so Eamon could travel the world relatively carefree. But his father's death had taught him a lesson. No matter how powerful you are, you live longer when no one knows you. And so he started to silently (he never leaves survivors, after revealing himself) become a powerhouse himself, by training his control over mana, studying his father's manuals to bend space, and by sacrificing other people to boost his already insane rate of growth. Now Eamon is three hundred years old. He had trained his body, mind, mana, and soul to the best of his ability and mastered many techniques. Be it swords, staffs, bows, spears, martial arts, or poisons. But as he prepared to advance his cultivation, he found a tome that taught him a secret art to create a clone. But to create a clone that is close to him in power (and doesn't weaken him in the creation process), he needs a body that has been prepared over a long time and has cultivated a similar or the same method as him. So he starts to look for promising disciples to create the necessary sacrifices to create his clones. By now, he has ten disciples, mostly orphans, who live in groups of two in the cultivation caves he prepared for them. But these disciples aren't to his satisfaction, so he starts to infiltrate righteous factions, either as an elder and teacher or as a disciple himself, to find one worthy of becoming his clones. The disciples only know about the other disciple who shares the cave with them, and don't know about Eamons plans.


So, all in all Eamon is a smart guy that stays undercover and waits for his opportunities with the grand goal of immortality. He uses the strategy of acting weak while being strong quite often. And because he always uses different weapons to kill his enemies there aren't even rumours about him.

Nah it's already good. Someone who was trained like tailung but even worse, forced to kill his own brother and have desire to immortality. But don't have human kindness or desires. I can work with that

 

[Empress_Omnii]

Name
Rayd
Race
Human (Isekaied)
History
From a planet far, far away from our Earth where the hit game Raid Shadow Legends took off and become the leading monopoly on it. The game growing to large it has everyone on the planet playing, the advertisers of yore are recognized for their role in bringing the company and game to such renown and fame.
The conglomerate owning the game setting its sites on extra terrestrial life. They have hired and trained those that lack the funds to spend on Raid Shadow Legends into ambassador and advertisers.
Rayd (self named) grew up playing Raid and has always dreamed of being like the advertisers of yore... after years of study, both in playing and advertising he was ready to go out into space and show the aliens the best game ever created and give them free character draws. (or something, I haven't played...) But on his first day on a known as Earth in year 2017 he was hit by a truck not long after leaving his flying saucer. Rayd was knocked unconscious and when he awoke on his deathbed he gave his well practiced last words "RAID: Shadow Legends is an immersive online experience with everything you'd expect from the world dominating RPG title. It's got an amazing storyline, awesome 3D graphics, giant boss fights, PVP battles, and thousands of never before seen champions to collect and customize..."

After his death Raid Shadow Legends as we know it was spread to that world and for his efforts he was isekaied into your world.

Appearance
An orphan born in the Central North America of his world he modeled his looked after 2020s youtubers (I... also don't really watch YouTube so... uh)
He was 21 by the time he died, but may have been reincarnated differently, not sure how your world works.
Personality
A young mind that views himself as a shonen protagonist would, thinking he can change the world and compares himself to legends, dreaming of reaching higher than they did. Addicted to reading, writing and sharing his ad reads. Rayd has lived his life studying the game and is as such very critical when it comes to optimising and competitive to a flaw.
Abilities
Trained in various forms of communication, language and space travel in order to spread Raid Shadow Legends.
While Rayd has no real combat experience or ability he is a genius when it comes to Tactics, even more so Raid Shadow Legends where he managed to become a top player when studying.

Soul Keeper
A tablet which has a special version of Raid Shadow Legends in which he can summon into the real world character from the game.
Not sure but you could;
1. Give him his account from before his Isekai.
2. Give him the ability to strengthen his characters as you normally do in game.
3. Have it based on mana cost and he can create any character or boss from the game.
Finally, he needs to be able to boost his summons even farther when advertising Raid Shadow Legends.
This is the basis of all his strength.


(Cool things he could do in a fight)
Start doing ad reads and give himself free characters buffs.

Convince people to play Raid Shadow Legends and win, either beating them in game, or them wanting to support Rayd in spreading the game.

If nearly losing, summon every character, ie thousands of heroes, dragons, demons and bosses.

...I don't know I haven't played the game.

 

[Empress_Omnii]

Not sure how that is, I did it all on my phone, for a game I know nothing about...

 

[Sergeandgreen]

Here is another Character Idea. this time on a bit more comedic side.

Name: Barry Baldwin
Race: Human
Appearance: Bald, white, Fat, with a goaty and unusually large hands.
Abilities: Everything he grabs with his left hand shrinks, and everything he grabs with the right hand becomes heavier. His special move is squasching you with both hands and pressuring you into a diamond shape. He is also quite strong and unnaturally flexible for his body shape.
Personality: He loves Dancing and is a magnificent dancer. In a fight, he uses that to dodge hits rather than tank them. He is also an attention-seeker. He isn't necessarily greedy, but he knows how to appreciate a good deal. He isn't particularly fond of getting harassed by weaklings and has fun in humiliating them if they annoy him enough. He almost never starts a fight. He uses his riches to hire powerful goons. He also is into older ladies. He prefers red wine instead of white wine.
Background: An orphan adopted by a circus. He soon became part of them, and they treated him like family. Because of his big hands he had a few minor roles in it but he wanted to become famous. So he left the circus at the age of twenty. The goal behind it was initially to get famous enough that his parents recognized him and sought him out, but that never happened. And by the time he was sure they were long dead, it had already become a habit of him to be the center of attention. In his attempt to become famous, he became a media mogul and became insanely rich. He sponsors young orphans to become actors without abusing them sexually as a form of payment. He takes part in the tournament to get revenge for one of the orphans he sponsored.

His soul keeper is a grumpy cat that always attacks him. But the cat can talk and is a strategic mastermind, even if a bit to selfconfident.

 

[Haku45]

Oh, i forgot the soul keeper part. What is a soul keeper anyway?
Anyway, the soul keeper looks like a mummified/zombified version of himself or his twin.

Great idea. Someone who's existing make you feel bad, warrior from the past. Someone who deserved live happy life. But it was ruined by his own brother

 

[Haku45]

Name
Rayd
Race
Human (Isekaied)
History
From a planet far, far away from our Earth where the hit game Raid Shadow Legends took off and become the leading monopoly on it. The game growing to large it has everyone on the planet playing, the advertisers of yore are recognized for their role in bringing the company and game to such renown and fame.
The conglomerate owning the game setting its sites on extra terrestrial life. They have hired and trained those that lack the funds to spend on Raid Shadow Legends into ambassador and advertisers.
Rayd (self named) grew up playing Raid and has always dreamed of being like the advertisers of yore... after years of study, both in playing and advertising he was ready to go out into space and show the aliens the best game ever created and give them free character draws. (or something, I haven't played...) But on his first day on a known as Earth in year 2017 he was hit by a truck not long after leaving his flying saucer. Rayd was knocked unconscious and when he awoke on his deathbed he gave his well practiced last words "RAID: Shadow Legends is an immersive online experience with everything you'd expect from the world dominating RPG title. It's got an amazing storyline, awesome 3D graphics, giant boss fights, PVP battles, and thousands of never before seen champions to collect and customize..."

After his death Raid Shadow Legends as we know it was spread to that world and for his efforts he was isekaied into your world.

Appearance
A born in Canada he modeled his looked after 2020s youtubers (I... also don't really watch YouTube so... uh)
He was 21 by the time he died, but may have been reincarnated differently, not sure how your world works.
Personality
A young mind that views himself as a shonen protagonist would, thinking he can change the world and compares himself to legends, dreaming of reaching higher than they did. Addicted to reading, writing and sharing his ad reads. Rayd has lived his life studying the game and is as such very critical when it comes to optimising and competitive to a flaw.
Abilities
Trained in various forms of communication, language and space travel in order to spread Raid Shadow Legends.
While Rayd has no real combat experience or ability he is a genius when it comes to Tactics, even more so Raid Shadow Legends where he managed to become a top player when studying.

Soul Keeper
A tablet which has a special version of Raid Shadow Legends in which he can summon into the real world character from the game.
Not sure but you could;
1. Give him his account from before his Isekai.
2. Give him the ability to strengthen his characters as you normally do in game.
3. Have it based on mana cost and he can create any character or boss from the game.
Finally, he needs to be able to boost his summons even farther when advertising Raid Shadow Legends.
This is the basis of all his strength.


(Cool things he could do in a fight)
Start doing ad reads and give himself free characters buffs.

Convince people to play Raid Shadow Legends and win, either beating them in game, or them wanting to support Rayd in spreading the game.

If nearly losing, summon every character, ie thousands of heroes, dragons, demons and bosses.

...I don't know I haven't played the game.

This man gonna anoy a lot of people. But yeah pretty original

 

[Nolff]

Well then, here's mine.


Name: Jide
Race: Hooman

Exposition: Once a technician, now forced to fight. Jide is a master of programming and hacking, he is a nightmare for the cybernetic department of any fictional world. As a part of the THC group, he possesses powers that can make his opponents look like ants. Telekinesis, psychic, physic enhancement, reality-bending, mind-bending, elemental, magic, you name it. That power is now gone because his friend took it as a part of his punishment for pranking the entire heads of THC; In short, he pranked them all. They agree to exile him somewhere so he'll suffer immeasurably. One of them managed to found a Colosseum tournament - he thought - and requested him to be exiled there. Now, he's trapped in this world.

There are two ways for him to go back to his home dimension, but it'll took either some time or some pain. The first one is to die which is obvious since he'll respawn in his bedroom, and the second is to win the tournament.

He cannot kill himself outside the tournament, because he already did that and respawned somewhere in this world. So, he must either get killed in the tournament or win it. And no, he won't choose the get killed option. His friends sent him a message that said "While in the tournament, your pain meter will be cranked to 11. So, even if you only get scratches or bruises, you're going to have the warmest dark soul's s*it every time you get hurt. So, don't die. :)"

Powers: (Due to balancing reasons, he was greatly nerfed and now only has the power to spawn goofy weapons to his advantage.) Spawning Rocket Jumper, Manntreads, Sticky Jumper, Dummy Sword, Chargin' Targe, The Tide Turner, and Ali Baba's Wee Booties.

Traits: Combat Prowess, Awareness, Swift, Strength, and Inhumane Reflex.

"Can he survive only with all these wacky-haha stuff?" "Not only will he survive, he will thrive." "Bet." "Bet. He'll lose for sure."

 

[Sergeandgreen]

And my last character of the day

Name: Jeff
Race: Manequin

Ability: Shapeshifting, cloning, and the ability to detach and attach limbs, pain immunity, dark magic.
Appearance: The default appearance is faceless, sexless manequin out of a cloth store.
Background story: A young necromancer was training to prepare corpses. As he was young and inexperienced, and fresh corpses were hard to come by he trained on a manequin. After training, he put the manequin in a black sack and stored it. A few months later, the necromancers lair was raided and in his defence he awakened all prepared corpses, accidentally including the manequin with his spell. The necromancer died a few minutes later. As the infiltrators saw him as nothing more than a manequin, they didn't destroy/kill him. Now his goal is to become a necromancer and revive his master. And he needs corpses to train.

Soul Keeper: A talking Necromonicon possessed by one of his masters ancestors. The necromonicon in question is a dark red book that grew muscular arms and legs and communicates with telepathy.

 

[Empress_Omnii]

This man gonna anoy a lot of people. But yeah pretty original

I didn't think hard enough when first making the appearance, if he does get included make sure he is covered in Raid Shadow Legend merchandise (maybe only willing to drink out of his Raid Shadow Legend cups and canteens) But at minimum his Soul Keeper better have all the raid keychains, cases (changed daily) and stickers possible.