brother realizing he's the reason her sister died (Isekaid?)

[HelooMateo23]

Brother stayed in Reality. Sister tansported to Fantasy ISEKAI

“Orphan” “You should not talk to me” She then looked towards the coffin She paused then said- “You should pass away like your sister” “you’re FILTH”

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Sorry, it wasnt kind of me to post here in the forum

I actually like the place

in case in the link above can you guys check it out again

it is my first writing

read up to the latest chapter

and you guys might enjoy it

 

[Plantorsomething]

This kind of self promo can put people off, just so you know. Good job posting stuff though

 

[Datal0g]

This kind of self promo can put people off, just so you know. Good job posting stuff though

I personally don't mind self-promo as there is promo for some good or interesting stuff I would probably miss.

This promo here is definitely on the "thanks but no thanks"-scale and I tried to read a few chapters...~130 words per chapter, massive linebreaks to stretch the "story", there was even an explantion at the end of chapters 3 how to read the chapter should be read, if the person reading it is still confused.

Definitely unreadable on a smartphone, borderline on a tablet...

 

[Lloyd]

This story is like the definition of slop someone shit out their ass.