Tripleblack
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Btw this is not a hardcore ecchi or anything. Cover is mostly to get people interested.
As you might've gotten from the title, it's been a long time since I came on here and asked for some feedback. Seeing as I'm coming back to writing my novel now that I actually have time to write again, I figured it's a good time to see what I've been doing wrong! Please feel free to rip into and tear my novel apart. Tell me everything you think works or doesn't work about it.
I don't expect you to read the entire 45 chapters that I currently have uploaded, but please tell me how much you have read. Also tell me if you're looking for a review swap.
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As you might've gotten from the title, it's been a long time since I came on here and asked for some feedback. Seeing as I'm coming back to writing my novel now that I actually have time to write again, I figured it's a good time to see what I've been doing wrong! Please feel free to rip into and tear my novel apart. Tell me everything you think works or doesn't work about it.
I don't expect you to read the entire 45 chapters that I currently have uploaded, but please tell me how much you have read. Also tell me if you're looking for a review swap.
The Revival of The Vampire Empress!
Crimson-haired, ancient, and terrifyingly beautiful, the renowned Vampire Empress had been sealed away for hundreds of years. The one to set her was Veri, a high school boy filled with delusions. Caught in the aftermath of her awakening, Veri is dragged into a hidden world of bloodlines...
