Anyone kind enough to give me some feedback on my Sci-Fi story?

TakeoMasaki

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I have been posting here for a while (almost 20k words so far), but unfortunately, so far I received very little comments or reviews.
As I'm trying to improve (I'm aware of many flaws of my book) - I would really appreciate if anyone here would take some time and look into it.
Thank you in advance!

 
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