Ai-chan
Queen of Yuri Devourer of Traps
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Ai-chan says this first, you won't be making money from this. Yes, Ai-chan won't pay you a cent. Not even a dollar.
With that out of the way, Ai-chan is making a one-shot CYOA about a couple of siblings who are stranded alone on Mars because everyone else are dead. The genres include: incest, sibling incest, blood-related incest, brother-sister incest, tragedy and romance. The tragedy part mostly involves everyone else other than them dying, though there would be a route where you purposely choose all the wrong options just so you can get to a bad end.
The original title was 'My Little Brother Is An Analist', but considering that the brother only does anal if the reader chooses it, it doesn't feel like a good choice of title. Plus, the playful sounding title doesn't match the tone of the story. So Ai-chan decided to change it to 'Let Wounds Be Rust' and make it romance-centered.
If you volunteer to be a proofreader, Ai-chan will give you an HTML5 file. This allows you to 'play' the story on any browser that runs HTML5 files, which is every browser since it's now the internet standard. It's not long. If you stick to one route until the end, it's probably less than 6,000 words for your route.
If you're interested in proofreading it, Ai-chan asks you to do the following:
1) Check for spelling or grammatical errors and inform Ai-chan of sentences that sound awkward.
2) Check the links and ensure that all links point to the right place. There are only up to two links for every node, so it shouldn't be too difficult.
3) Check if the story and ending make sense.
4) Criticize the technical aspects of the story. Example includes how a car works.
Please inform Ai-chan if you're interested.
With that out of the way, Ai-chan is making a one-shot CYOA about a couple of siblings who are stranded alone on Mars because everyone else are dead. The genres include: incest, sibling incest, blood-related incest, brother-sister incest, tragedy and romance. The tragedy part mostly involves everyone else other than them dying, though there would be a route where you purposely choose all the wrong options just so you can get to a bad end.
The original title was 'My Little Brother Is An Analist', but considering that the brother only does anal if the reader chooses it, it doesn't feel like a good choice of title. Plus, the playful sounding title doesn't match the tone of the story. So Ai-chan decided to change it to 'Let Wounds Be Rust' and make it romance-centered.
If you volunteer to be a proofreader, Ai-chan will give you an HTML5 file. This allows you to 'play' the story on any browser that runs HTML5 files, which is every browser since it's now the internet standard. It's not long. If you stick to one route until the end, it's probably less than 6,000 words for your route.
If you're interested in proofreading it, Ai-chan asks you to do the following:
1) Check for spelling or grammatical errors and inform Ai-chan of sentences that sound awkward.
2) Check the links and ensure that all links point to the right place. There are only up to two links for every node, so it shouldn't be too difficult.
3) Check if the story and ending make sense.
4) Criticize the technical aspects of the story. Example includes how a car works.
Please inform Ai-chan if you're interested.
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