Anyone bored and wanna review my story? lol

AceGav

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Greetings!
So ye, basically the title. I'm kind of new to writing as a hobby (just started very recently) and discovered this site this week; is anyone down to reading and maybe commenting on what I've got? It's basically a fantasy adventure story mixed with elements of apocalypse and destiny and things like that.
If you want to read, I rlly appreciate it :)
There's abt 5 chapters so far
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