Any tips or help with my story?

[MrPopocap]

The Green Arrow

One day, a man woke up inside Oliver Queen's body. Armed with knowledge about things to come, will he be able to live the life he wants while saving his newfound loved ones? - Roughly based in the same universe as DC Animated Movie Universe (DCAMU). ----------------- You can also...

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If you can give me some feedback, I would appreciate it.