Any honest feedback on this chapter?

[HellsPerfectSpawn]

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Any gents willing to give it a gander. Much obliged by the way.

PS: Thank You for your time

 

[Xcalibur_Xc]

Kindly go to story feedback thread if you want feedback instead of promoting here in author's general. Lately too many are promoting here.

 

[HellsPerfectSpawn]

Kindly go to story feedback thread if you want feedback instead of promoting here in author's general. Lately too many are promoting here.

?.? Promoting what? I'm asking for feedback on a chapter not a story. Don’t jump to conclusions.

 

[FieryLou]

?.? Promoting what? I'm asking for feedback on a chapter not a story. Don’t jump to conclusions.

its hella the same.

 

[Enkiari]

?.? Promoting what? I'm asking for feedback on a chapter not a story. Don’t jump to conclusions.

In this case, it is the same. i am moving the thread.

 

[Xcalibur_Xc]

?.? Promoting what? I'm asking for feedback on a chapter not a story. Don’t jump to conclusions.

?? Why are you acting so surprised? It's the same as promoting your book. No one is going to read chapter 5 you are posting without reading from the start. lol. Would they, now?

 

[Max02]

If anything, at least you've got plenty of readers to give you feedback.

Cosmic horror is great, but I'd need to read the previous chapters to understand the story.

 

[HellsPerfectSpawn]

its hella the same.

?? Why are you acting so surprised? It's the same as promoting your book. No one is going to read chapter 5 you are posting without reading from the start. lol. Would they, now?

If you say so, man.