Any advice for my stories for a newbie author

[BigHoodieBoy]

I have two series, both pretty short, I think they’re pretty good, but I really wanna how I can improve them. All advice is appreciated. Here they are:
MHA fanfic
My Orginal Isekai

 

[Layenlml]

Be clear of what you want? I know of some novels where the authors just stopped writing or had to re make everthing just because everything became a mess or went to direction they didnt like.

Just do you. People will both love and hate your novel no matter what you do. As long as you are consistent and don't make too make obious mistakes like making a character braindead out of nowhere or nerf/buff them without a reason everything will go fine.

 

[_oinkchan]

I have two series, both pretty short, I think they’re pretty good, but I really wanna how I can improve them. All advice is appreciated. Here they are:
MHA fanfic
My Orginal Isekai

You will get setbacks. Readers will spread toxicity etc. Don't mind any of that. Take criticism and improve but control your emotions to never get hurt. Lastly, don't rage. When you do that, you become the fool. Just say thanks to all criticism with a smile. I have no other advice, as you write... You will get better and get experience.

 

[KrisVFX]

I have two series, both pretty short, I think they’re pretty good, but I really wanna how I can improve them. All advice is appreciated. Here they are:
MHA fanfic
My Orginal Isekai

Its been more than a year since I started writing, and I gotta say that I improved a lot. My advice for you would be to keep writing and to never give up. It doesn't matter whether your story is good or not, what matters is that you love your own work! If you do that, I'm sure you'll get a supportive feedback and criticism! Good luck!

 

[Plantorsomething]

I have two series, both pretty short, I think they’re pretty good, but I really wanna how I can improve them. All advice is appreciated. Here they are:
MHA fanfic
My Orginal Isekai

Learning outlines saves a lot of stress and it’s surprisingly easy. There are a few ways but here’s a video of what I found recently. It’s not the video I used but it details the same thing I think.

 

[RepresentingCaution]

Write what you love, and someone else will also love it.

 

[AKnightWithaKnife]

Have grammar that’s it