Tripleblack
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Alright I'm around 40 chapters deep into my novel, but it's never too late to look for some feedback from people.
I want to hear some opinions on what I've written so far and in return, I'm happy to go through someone else's work. All I ask is that you finish the first two chapters and from there you can read as much as you think you need to get a grasp on the story.
Please tell me what you think works or doesn't work in the story. Also please tell me how many chapters you read.
Here's the link:https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1135540/the-revival-of-the-vampire-empress/
This isn't really an ecchi, but I put the tag on there since there are some scenes that kind of skirt the line.
I want to hear some opinions on what I've written so far and in return, I'm happy to go through someone else's work. All I ask is that you finish the first two chapters and from there you can read as much as you think you need to get a grasp on the story.
Please tell me what you think works or doesn't work in the story. Also please tell me how many chapters you read.
Here's the link:https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1135540/the-revival-of-the-vampire-empress/
This isn't really an ecchi, but I put the tag on there since there are some scenes that kind of skirt the line.