MFontana
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I've just released the first chapter of Aethara earlier today, and would really appreciate some feedback on the prelude and opening chapter.
Likes?
Dislikes?
And most importantly, Why? (Why do you like it? / Why do you dislike it?)
Full critiques, reviews, and ratings are always welcome.
Your thoughts, and input, can help to shape the story as well.
Likes?
Dislikes?
And most importantly, Why? (Why do you like it? / Why do you dislike it?)
Full critiques, reviews, and ratings are always welcome.
Your thoughts, and input, can help to shape the story as well.