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Which of the leading ladies do you want the details for next?

  • Isabel

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  • Crown Princess Seiara

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  • Kivah Talquin

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  • Sylani

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Okay. That new story, formally called Project H has a formal title now; released with Chapter 1 (as promised).
The series is called Aestelle Nocte, and Chapter 1 is live.
A beast of a chapter nearing the higher end of my average length (6500 words) that is also the first time I've written any full-frontal nudity into any story, as well as any full-scale erotica story beats, so I would really appreciate feedback, primarily on those beats, but any series feedback or discussion would be welcome.

As part of my ongoing polling for the story, this poll is about the leading ladies of the series, because lets face it, they're the characters who really drive the Harem genre elements forward. Whose details do you want added to the Full Character Details (Notes) next?

And as for my 'GMing' question to those who read the chapter; "What do YOU want Isabel to do next?"
Anything is fair game. Response with the most likes/reactions will be how chapter 2 starts (as long as it is inline with her character).

So to that end, here's a brief rundown of her character.
  • Isabel is Tobias' friend, and they have been friends since they were kids.
  • She has some self-worth insecurities and is harboring a crush that she refuses to acknowledge.
  • She is a Punk-Goth with an assertive, no-nonsense, extroverted personality.
  • She views (will view) Jaeyla as her main competition for Tobias' affection throughout the story, and doesn't trust her. (Partially because of the scene in Chapter 1).
 
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