Advice on world building

georgelee5786

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In my story, the desert reaper, I have noticed that there is a lack of world building. I want to fix this, but I am not entirely sure about how to go about it. Any advice?
 
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Depends. Provide more details on what part needs fixing. Character development? Lands and cultures of your world? Etc.?
 

AnonUnlimited

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You don't need to do a lot of world building at the beginning. Just put in things little by little, add subtle details and add more as the story is relevant.

The important thing you have to ask is if you're doing hard world building or soft world building.

Hard world building requires rules and consistency that can't be broken. Soft world building means you can add anything you want as long as it is relevant to the story. From what I've read though you want to go to the "hard building route" so my suggestion is just add thing little by little, but unless it's something important to the story don't spend too much time focusing on it.

Things like "who was the King" or when was the last era in the world that ended are small details I like to read when people do world building.
 

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The lands and cultures
A lot of these can be thought up by just walking around.

About the land, it usually involves geography of the land, is it hilly, mountainous, flat. How easy is it to walk there. What flora and fauna is there. How dangerous is the place for the average person, etc. Basically, just walk through a part of the city. Whatever your thoughts on it, can be the setup for the land you want to write about. It is impossible for you not to have any thoughts about the parts of the land you walk about, you just don't realize that you are actually forming an opinion of that place. Write that down.

As for cultures, these too can be thought up by just walking around. Some people spit on the ground? That could be one part of the culture of one group of people in your story. You see someone arguing, that's an idea right there. You see someone stepping on dog poop, that's another idea. So now you have a group of people called the Masingi (first word that came up in Ai-chan's head) who are a disgusting group of creatures who trail spit wherever they go, loves to pick fights and is so clumsy and stupid to the point that they don't realize they've made themselves enemies everywhere.
 
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maybe just write the world you want to be in, and explain to the readers like you're going on vacation there.
 
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