? Action Scene Alert! Help Me Perfect Chapter 6! ?

[SabrielSilver]

I just published the newest chapter of The Amulet of Duality, and I’d love your feedback! This is one of my first full action scenes so feedback for is greatly appreciated!

Things I’d love to know:

• Did the pacing of the action feel engaging and clear?
• Were the stakes effectively conveyed?
• Did Solena’s struggle with moonlight magic resonate emotionally?
• Any moments that stood out or felt confusing?

Your insights will help me refine not just this chapter but future action scenes as well. Thank you for being part of this journey with me!

Check it out here: The Amulet of Duality

Thanks!
Sabriel Silver