It took me a lot of courage to finally post something for someone other than myself to review, Please take a moment to give feedback on my novel. Thank you!
pretty good. read 3 chapters. overall writing is above average. your first chapter doesn't do you any favors though. also, there are a few inconsistencies that didn't make sense. main reason I didn't read any further actually
also you'll find like 4 active feedback threads, post your novel there