A writer trying to gain some confidence

greyblob

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pretty good. read 3 chapters. overall writing is above average. your first chapter doesn't do you any favors though. also, there are a few inconsistencies that didn't make sense. main reason I didn't read any further actually



also you'll find like 4 active feedback threads, post your novel there
 
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