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Tsuru
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Bc the name is popular and kinda ez to remember.
You see Lin Fen its MC
you see Zhen Tong, it feels weird to have MC have it.
Not joking when i say, that once i saw someone wrote for its MC's a name that sounded like a side character would have, and each time i had remember its him.
Same as Yui was kinda the trend for jp before
or a name that had first letter M N
but not A Z
(asuna kinda an exception the rule)
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I'm not really sure what the tone is meant to be? It's a massacre at a wedding but there's no weight to it. Lin Fan is acting boyish, and feels a bit irreverent but then drinks blood and talks about craving blood stink? The Onomatopoeia are cartoonish but then the violence is described graphically. What am I meant to be feeling?
'The reason behind Lin Fan’s madness traced back to his uncle.' this feels out of place, maybe explain this later rather than in the middle of the battle? Kinda breaks the pacing.
My honest opinion is that I have no idea what the point of this scene is. Have fun!
'The reason behind Lin Fan’s madness traced back to his uncle.' this feels out of place, maybe explain this later rather than in the middle of the battle? Kinda breaks the pacing.
My honest opinion is that I have no idea what the point of this scene is. Have fun!
