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    How Horrible/Miserable Can I Make It For My Main Character In The Beginning?

    There was another anime I watched that had crap a lot worse than what happened to Yoko in 12 Kingdoms. Basically I wanted to take elements of what happened to both Yoko and that character and write a story about a character whos been through a heavy amount of suffering, and while not overcome it...
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    How Horrible/Miserable Can I Make It For My Main Character In The Beginning?

    I have read the book. Honestly it's the same with horror. Having something horrible described to you in graphic detail is much more unnerving than just seeing it happen. Also in the anime. More people sufffer. Seeing Yokos male friend reduced to what he was in the show was depressing and...
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    How Horrible/Miserable Can I Make It For My Main Character In The Beginning?

    That's the idea for my protag. Although it's not so much 'insanity' as it is being broken and molded into a completely different person. I dunno. Quite a few books and anime I read and watch can get INCREDIBLY dark at points. Berserk makes no bones about how awful it's setting is right out of...
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    Lets Make Some Culture! Part 1

    Can this just be a generic world-building thread?
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    How Horrible/Miserable Can I Make It For My Main Character In The Beginning?

    What if the suffering is done with intent to improve/change the character?
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    How Horrible/Miserable Can I Make It For My Main Character In The Beginning?

    How offended would people be if I went into detail about what I planned to do to my character here?
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    Lets Make Some Culture! Part 1

    In my own work I'm trying to create a setting that is the best of both. That is very much reminscent of D&D style fantasy worlds like the examples I said, but not entirely as unmoored from logic and realism as those settings.
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    Lets Make Some Culture! Part 1

    The problem I have with so many Japanese Light Novels is that the fantasy settings are so generic and don't feel like real worlds with real cultures and ways of life and religion. Compare the setting of Grimgar RE Zero or Goblin Slayer, to Game Of Thrones, Lord Of The Rings, or Berserk. The...
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    How to write sad event?

    Your characters aren't real, they are constructs. Remind yourself of that. You're not abusing a person when you write sad or tragic or messed up events. You're abusing lines of code. Writers have to be sociopaths sometimes.
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    How Horrible/Miserable Can I Make It For My Main Character In The Beginning?

    Serious question. As I was once told that you need to hold off on having horrible things happening to your main character in order to establish the stakes of the setting and then when you've lulled the reader into a false sense of security. Then you hit them with the misery porn or the violence...
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    Do you ever share your ideas to other people?

    All the time. But I usually change just enough to avoid giving too much away when I describe it to them.
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