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Didnt update my story for more than a week and now I feel disappointed in myself :blob_teary: im probably more upset about the late update than my readers are lmao

Noted! Yup, I'll be reading more into office politics and how easy will it be to even be promoted, although as of now, my goal for the story is to make it focus on the relationships between the characters instead of the complicated things but yeah, I'll definitely consider that. I'm so...

I was in the same sort of situation years ago, I had a thing for writing and making stories but had to face the reality that I needed to read a good amount of books if I wanted to do this seriously. Now, It Ends with Us is well... problematic, it romanticizes abuse, the author itself is pretty...

Everyone else has given their own criticism here so I won't point out the obvious. But, I'll give you a simple advice to add on. Read a lot, not just because you are obligated to, you have to read stories that you would personally enjoy. At some point your brain will just know how to form words...

my music is silence usually but I did found some ppl say that minecraft ambient music helps with focus a lot, and very calming, I put it on when doing work or just for the vibes If I were to answer this three years ago? most Chase Atlantic's songs, idk why lmao

Just read up until chapter 2! Sigrún is funny I like her :blob_happy: Most of the stories I've written are in third-person with past tense, that's my only qualification, so take my feedback with a grain of salt <: I noticed that you used 'would' a lot for actions, he would do this, it would...

omg yeah of course, don't worry! Just taking the feedback as a reminder there's a lot for me to learn regarding general dynamics and expectations in the office and stuff :blob_okay: It would be out of character for her to start caring about hierarchy and things like that haha so I'm not...

Noted! My only knowledge on office politics is limited to my own observations through reading other office-setting stories and well, my family members lol but yeah I'll definitely give some more thoughts on that Other than that, yes, Jasmine is supposed to be somewhat unlikeable especially in...

That really is a relief for me to hear :blob_happy: at the end of the day writing consistently is the only way to grow here (and also personally enjoying it lol) THANK YOU SO MUCH :blob_teary: I've been overthinking my writing these days and had to search around whether complex descriptions was...

Heyya, my story is set in an office, not a CEO x assistant/subordinate kind of story, just two normal co-workers falling for each other and I'd like some feedback on my writing. My descriptions aren't that detailed so I just want to know whether readers can still imagine the whole office and...

depends, if it's a story I'd imagine publishing traditionally one day, I'd write with hand so I won't edit the first draft while I write for stories for me to indulge in for fun bc nobody wrote it yet, I'd just type, the one I'm currently writing here is by typing right on the spot