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This just convinced me to never attempt learning French, thank you very much.

I definitely understand what you're saying. Had the same reaction too once I was reading The Amber Sword. I was able to tolerate it as time passed but stopped reading to accumulate for chapters. Seriously, who names a guy "Sophie"? I'll find some other name in the meantime, as well as post my...

Yikes! I'll just get rid of it, hahaha. Perhaps it may have become a force of habit because I was exposed to so many texts that was patterned the same way. Hmmm, wasn't aware that it was a feminine name. I didn't really think about the name in-depth, so I might have to rethink it based on what...

Understood! Word isn't giving me any of those red squiggly lines so I assumed everything was fine and dandy. I'll try to check out what Grammarly has to say :DD

I tried to shorten it this time around. Please give it a read once more. Replaced those parts that you parts you mentioned, and I tried my best as well to make it as interesting as possible. Would be much appreciated if you could give it another read-over! I'm not sure if the revised...

Oh, please feel free to critique! I appreciate the honesty as well as the suggestions, especially with regards to how my sentence construction feels a bit iffy. I'll be modifying the synopsis and hopefully get post the first chapter / prologue by today or tomorrow, at least. Can I tag you by...

It comes off like that, huh? Aight, definitely cutting it shorter now. May I ask if its the length that you're not too keen on, or the premise of the story itself? I'm also interested in gauging (potential) readers' thoughts.

Yeah, it really is quite long. In fact, it occupied the entire screen. Hmm... I guess I'll cut it by half, and incorporate the discarded lines into the prologue or something.

Thanks! Can I ask if there was anything specific that you found odd, jarring, or misplaced?

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/437380/tale-of-cecil-somehow-when-i-was-challenging-the-trial-i-accidentally-got-transferred-to-another-world/ Hello! I'm really motivated to start working on this novel, so a quick feedback or some form of critique would be a great help! I haven't really...