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  1. Bella_Trixie

    Please give me your criticisms!

    The original story was just the beginning of Arc 1's plotline, so not really that far. I have no idea how many chapters I have planned, because I have several arcs in mind. Basically, though, I'm taking the same general structure of the arc and putting it into the updated events of the rewrite...
  2. Bella_Trixie

    Please give me your criticisms!

    Thanks! Glad you enjoyed the original write up. Have you read the new version?
  3. Bella_Trixie

    Please give me your criticisms!

    So, I decided to rewrite my book from scratch! I originally had 10 chapters that totaled up to 14.5k words, but I didn't like it that much after it got into the later chapters. But, I'm really proud of this version! The first chapter is 8.2k words and is really good, in my opinion! Please give...
  4. Bella_Trixie

    Feedback for my story??? Needing readers!

    Hi everyone! I've posted four chapters so far and will be uploading another chapter tomorrow. It's a light novel so it's not written in the same style as a typical novel, instead it's much more loose and freeform. Just wanting to get some criticisms and what not...
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