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Aaah, I didn't actually know there were no indents. I get really confused on the formatting of the story sometimes 'cause I do all my work on mobile. Sorry! I'll try and fix it after my exams, ehe. Aaah I totally get what you're saying, I had a feeling it would be incredibly confusing. I've...

Aaah thank you! I'll keep what you said in mind! Though, I do have to say that Clailip's (and most others) character isn't supposed to make sense (well not yet anyway) so I guess I hit the nail on that one! I like absurd characters that look and feel flat for a couple of chapters and flesh them...

Great! It was just a thing I noticed lol, I thought the whole introduction was a bit boring and could have been done better, but its great as it is! Keep up the amazing work!

Got it! I'll read your story and give you a comment then! Aah, but yes, the spaces are kind of there because of my style of formatting. I don't think I can change how Justified works ehe.

Oooh what do you think of this one? I personally dont think itll be super popular 'cause its a bit niche- https://www.scribblehub.com/series/463602/harmless-sweetie-rewritten-litrpg-following-a-young-boy-exploring-a-dangerous-world/stats/

That sounds like an amazing deal! But just in case, I really like the premise and the synopsis of your stories (especially the magical girl one, I don't think I've ever seen a mahou shoujo litrpg ever! It's such a cool and unique concept!) is it okay if I give a review too? Of course I'll still...

Hiya! So I have this book! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/463602/harmless-sweetie-rewritten-litrpg-following-a-young-boy-exploring-a-dangerous-world/stats/ And I was wondering if a couple people would mind sharing their feedback with me! It doesn't matter if it's positive, negative, harsh...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/380413/the-harmless-sweetie-is-far-from-harmless-under-editing/stats/ If you like generic mcs with unrealistic emotional responses to tragedies, then you'll love my story! It's a sweet isekai that's definitely not going to get demented and f**cked in the...

Just wanted to notify you just in case you haven't seen yet, I've posted the review! Once again, thank you for the swap!

I'd love to! I'll get to it after reviewing the other book, thank you for the swap!

Understood! I'll write one up when I finish reading, thank you for the swap!

Understood! It would be nice if you could post it on the actual story! But if you're not comfy with that you could just send it to me. Ooh, okay then, thank you! My story isn't 20k words yet as most if it is still under editing. But if you do change your mind and want me to review your story...

Yeah ur super right I'm planning to change the naming style of the chapters after the tenth one lmao

How did you even know I was filipino- also thanks! What's the story you want me to review for you? Its just filipino don't worry too much ^^

Hiya! Is anyone here up for a review swap? I'll read around 20-25k words of your story and leave a review based on style, characters, and storyline. I'd prefer it if you could do the same too, but honestly just a small write up of what you liked and disliked about my story is okay too! Here's...

Thank you! This means a lot, I'll be sure to add more lore about the gods and how the whole system works then. Have a nice day then!

Ooh, understood, I'll take your feedback and use it for my future works. Reduce exposition and just get straight right into it. Thank you so much!

Aaah, I'm an amateur writer and I'm pretty new so I don't expect anyone to know me. But I'd greatly appreciate it if someone reviewed my book. If you do, I'd greatly appreciate the feedback, and thank you! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/380413/the-harmless-sweetie-is-far-from-harmless/...

I'm absolutely dying trying to format my work I've deleted the chapter five times now and each time I try again it just keeps getting worse