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Cool. Great opening. Simple yet captivating hook and the plot gets straight to the point as promised in the description. My one problem is that the vocabulary feels dull. A minor complaint when compared to the storytelling itself. Now, I wouldn't know what it's like to work with a TEAM to...

Thank you for all the feedback. Those who posted in here or sent me PMs. Newcomers are still welcome to offer advice, but I have already made some motions to rewrite/enhance the chapters (the story is the same it will just be much more enriching).

Yeah, the paragraph separation is just a problem carried over when I copied my story from other sites. I'd go through and edit it, but it becomes tedious to do so for every chapter release. Thanks for giving it a try, though

Dude! Thank you so much! You gave me the first bit of descriptive, honest feedback in all the places I've posted. I always considered revealing the world in bits and pieces over a long period of time, but I didn't consider how important that was at the beginning. Seriously, you have no idea how...

Yeah. You see, I'm going for a saga-sized story. I don't care if it doesn't blow up, but a story of that caliber is going to take a long time. I don't want the very fundamentals of that to be rotten if they need a rewrite

So, when I posted my story to both RRL and ScribbleHub, sometimes I'll get the full five-star ratings and sometimes I'll get absolutely blasted. Obviously different people have different tastes but these poor ratings never come with an explanation. I'm the author. For the most part, I'm blind...

Just arrived

Look, I haven't been one for joining internet communities until recently when I started posting a web novel. Therefore, I don't have much to compare with, but it seems like the community here exploded in size. I checked the General threads and the earliest of the two posts there is January 7...