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    How to prepare to kill a character in a tragic/heroic manner?

    I think killing the characters mc closest to is the easiest and most efficient plot device for the MC to grow or change in a short time. Instead of mc going through the normal way of life and experience and gradually grow as a character, to die/kill someone close to him is the most shortcut and...
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    How to prepare to kill a character in a tragic/heroic manner?

    I never thought the mangaka would kill of characters like Asuma, I assumed he had main plot armor like everyone else, his death was tragic and unexpected and leaving behind his girlfriend and unborn child. Definetly one of the iconiq tragic deaths, Not mention Rebecca was not there in the...
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    How to prepare to kill a character in a tragic/heroic manner?

    What is the best way to kill off characters? Naturally, their deaths should be meaningful and have a real impact on the story. As an author, how do you prepare a character’s journey so that they leave a lasting impression and die in a heroic or tragic way that allows the story to pivot or...
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    What are some things you wish you knew when you started writing?

    Waiting for the impact... the main conflict... to finally show up... I regret taking so long to get to the main action and letting the conflict set in. I spent too much time on worldbuilding and showing character growth instead of focusing on the central conflict and the trigger points of the...
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    Recommendations Post your books so I can read

    Shameless self promotion :3 Benjamin Almond is a healer, just not the kind you're used to. With SSS-tier healing, super strength, and plant manipulation, he doesn’t sit in the backlines. He charges headfirst into battle, fists flying and vines ripping through enemies. Most see him as a rogue...
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    Hey writers! I found a very helpful app to map your story/characters!

    Not sponsored or anything. But I am totally in love with this app for a couple of days, and I am just shocked that why no one has ever mentioned something like this existed.
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    Hey writers! I found a very helpful app to map your story/characters!

    Just tried Milanote, and my god I am blown away by how much it helps me organize my novel stuff. I had been looking for something like this for a long time and was using a diary which was still a mess. When I used Milanote, I was really blown away. I even went ahead and bought a pro plan, which...
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    Favorite piece of video game sountrack of all time

    Honor for All from Dishonored 1 after completing it. Etched to my memory. Soothing song!
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    Is it offensive?

    Lord Ganesha is still prayed in India, just a week ago we celebrated Ganesh Chaturthi. But I don't think most of them would be offended for their gods to be seen in a cameo like that. There was also Ganesha in Danmachi where he's actually the god of his familia. Even in the Samurai Jack...
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    Who is the cutest on SH?

    My granny says its 'me'
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    Your thoughts on the live action adaptation of One Piece

    That might be, but Ussop stood before Kalhodore when the pirates tried attacking the village in the anime. He was also previously wounded and beaten up and still tried to hold Kalhodore by grabbing his legs. Meanwhile in the live action Ussop during the entire syrup arc just shot one ball from...
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    Your thoughts on the live action adaptation of One Piece

    I would say its the best anime adaption to live action up to date. The people who usually avoids one piece because of its 'manga/anime' would love the introduction to the OP world. I would still say the anime despite having old animation is superior than the live action version. But I would say...
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    You are locked in a room with the MC of the last series you've worked on for 24 hours...

    I will be executed by the mc. After all, it means I was the one who killed his pregnant wife and the revenge he was seeking for the perpetrators will eventually land on me as the mastermind
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    Cookies ? love interest, Yay or Nay [Poll] [Free Cookies ?]

    Team Biscuits for the win!
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    Write awesome killing intent moments

    It was already late at night and I quietly crept inside the room slowly tip-toeing my way. The place was dark but I could see the jar being illuminated by the moonlight through the windowsill. I slowly went to the counter and grabbed the holy jar. It was already late and by now everyone should...
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    How big of a dump should I take?

    Well technically yes, I am trying to introduce to the new royal mage academy. Just trying to you know tell the uniqueness of the royal academy and why its so influential + The varied description as where the academy is situated. Just this two alone information went about 600+ words. I wanted to...
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    How big of a dump should I take?

    So how much info dump could I do, before they start making fun of me?
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    How big of a dump should I take?

    I wanted to ask how much(word count) info dump is considered okay. There are actions and dialogues added in between to not get bored. But how much info dump can we have with breaks and without breaks? How much info dump should there be in one chapter? Are there any limits? Also some tips to...
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    How to write a certain scene?

    You can just describe the character's bad table manners in detail. For eg: -Chewing food loudly -Talking while eating food and spitting crumbs -Spilling food on table and clothes -Describe Greasy yucky hands that he uses to soil all the cutlery around -Maybe using the same indirect kiss- spoon...
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    Recommendations Grand plans get much smaller over time

    Huh? but you said grand plans diminishing -> to less grand plans -> to just doable plans... My bad if I misunderstood
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