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    Writing Help naming a pocket dimension

    Damn. Barely 20 minutes and you guys gave me more than I know how to use, thanks a bunch.
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    Writing Help naming a pocket dimension

    I'm writing a fantasy setting book, and I really can't come up with a name for what the magical spaces of the world would be called by someone actually living there. Physically speaking, they're a distortion in space that magic gathers towards, with a whole "bigger on the inside" thing going on...
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    When a random thought breaks your story immersion

    A big point about writing is only including the important, relevant stuff. Nine times out of ten, when an author brings up a character pooping, I, as a reader, interpret this as either a crass attempt at toilet humor or their weird scat fetish. It carries the same rules as real social situations...
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    What is it with “yuri” authors and not using the bisexual protagonist tag

    I have similar issues with RR and how they seem to love sticking the "LGBTQ+" descriptor onto their books. Like, that's about two dozen tags rolled into one and it doesn't tell me anything about your book. If the MC is gay, then put it in the description.
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    What's a good way to start a story?

    In my experience as a reader, the death scene has been done a thousand times and everyone's already seen it before. Skip the death itself and just show what happens afterwards with the narrator or character referring to the event in past tense. This is all assuming that the events surrounding...
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    Other good sites to publish on

    There is Creative Novels, but they don't have a large reader base. It still might get you some new fans though.
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    How much do y'all care about realism in your stories?

    I agree, It's so excessive and over-the-top that it makes the world less believable, but in turn more entertaining to watch. It's more about "what are they going to come up with next" than anything else.
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    How much do y'all care about realism in your stories?

    I think it's more important for things to be consistent and explained well enough. If you break the rules of our normal reality, make sure the audience understands the new rules so that they don't get blindsided. That aside, I prefer the less grounded stuff because I like the fantasy of the...
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    How do you get out of the NTR Hole

    This guy gets it. In all seriousness, I find that cute yuri helps with degeneracy in general.
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    How should I finish a yandere story?

    Yuri ending between the two girls, the guy gets nothing.
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