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    Character icons as dialogue tags?

    They are great! Just a few tips: Scale them down, use neutral and cold colors (that orange/red is very distracting), and limit their use. In a word: you already know what to do.
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    Post Your Synopsis & Get Feedback

    Thanks, you don't know how much you helped me. Also, there was a huge typo, thought instead of tough, in the original synopsis. I am reading How to Write a Sizzling Synopsis, in order to improve in this area.
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    I am writing my second novel. The first was a bloody mess (and still needs plenty of editing). Feel free to massacre my first chapter on every aspect: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/122602-the-saga-of-erik-the-unyielding/chapter/122603/ Personally, it feels mediocre, I wouldn't keep reading...
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    Post Your Synopsis & Get Feedback

    Title: The Saga of Erik the Unyielding Genre: Fantasy, Adventure, Action, Tragedy Erik was an average farmer, hoping for a tranquil life. That is past now. Cursed by a witch, now alone and cursed. He travels the world in search of the gods of old that may relieve him of his curse...
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