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    Looking for feedback on my first Scribble Hub novel

    Touma if he causes the girls to not like him back, so the opposite of Katsuragi actually.
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    Looking for feedback on my first Scribble Hub novel

    Hi everyone, regular NPC Villager A here, and I'm seeking feedback on my romcom novel attempt. Link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2245921/barrys-bad-luck/ Feedback type: How was the pacing? Was it easy to read? And how is my main character as the narrator, since almost the entire story...
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    Offering feedback on the first chapter of your story (No Smut)

    Gonna throw mine too. Link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2245921/barrys-bad-luck/ For some context: This is a romcom that spans middle school until high school The story is divided into arcs, which I just conveniently name after the girls features, so the first 3 chapters I posted...
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    Targeted Story Feedback Thread (READ THE NOTE)

    Greetings, oh esteemed reading and reviewing veteran. I happened upon your thread and thought I could perhaps gain some feedback on my humble romcom attempt. Right now I've posted the first of multiple story arcs, with each arc being 3-4 chapters in general and features a new girl and a new...
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