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At face value, it does look simple, and if executed correctly could indeed be diverse. It's actually a pretty interesting twist, compared to the usual magic systems. The strengths & weaknesses are good. They clearly give you an idea of who might use them and for what. This a bit vague in my...

I can kind of see what you're going for, and there's definitely some appeal to it. I think you got the behavior and verbal capacity of a child perfectly, though. :blobthumbsup: But personally, it's not my cup of tea.

Honestly, I think that one or two chapters a week is more than enough to release each week. I don't know if you prefer being ahead of schedule or just happened to do so, but I intend to do just that for the story I'm currently working on (just started). In my opinion, it just takes away the...