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I ran into an interesting dilemma because I received very different responses across platforms. On ScribbleHub, some readers felt disoriented by the prologue, while on Webnovel-oriented spaces the intent and structure were understood more quickly. This seems to be one of those platform...

Thank you for your feedback. I now understand the source of the confusion. The novel's title is The Strongest Assassin. Without the context provided by the title or the synopsis, it is understandable that readers might initially think, "What is this plot about?" To address this, I will...

Thanks for taking the time to comment, I appreciate you looking at it even if only briefly. I think there may have been a small disconnect due to skimming, so just to clarify intent: the “monster” in the prologue isn’t a creature or external threat. It’s entirely human. The POV is deliberately...

I have written eleven chapters of my assassin novel so far, and I decided to add a prologue. The goal is to establish the tone, showcase the main character’s capabilities, and set clear expectations for what kind of story this is. --- PROLOGUE - The Wolf at the Door [Perspective: Lord Faraz]...

Hey. I love the Cultivation/Xianxia genre, but I often struggle with the stiff dialogue. So, for my first fiction, I decided to try something different. The Premise: A burned-out, cynical assassin is forced to escort a princess with zero talent. The Twist: instead of the usual flowery prose...

Hello everyone, I’ve just launched a new project, The Strongest Assassin & The Weakest Princess, and I’m looking for some honest feedback on the first two chapters (about 2k-3k words total). https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2052170/the-strongest-assassin--weakest-princess/ The Concept: I’m...

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