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Thank you everyone for the advice, I will try to split it up into questions and answers more.

So in this situation, my deuteragonist, is trying to explain the bond to the protagonist. He has been transported to the world, has no history, and suddenly found himself bonded to her. So my question is if this is too much, just a lore dump? should I just put it in an indirect or summarized...

nope that is exactly what I was looking for thanks. I knew I had seen them somewhere before, just couldn't seem to find them easily.

I was just wondering is there a post or link or something to the rules of what is allowable for creators to post on book content for Scribblehub? I have searched the forum, but nothing seems concrete and there doesn't seem to be a pinned post on it. I have read the terms and understand those...

Thank you. It is a prologue, so not sure how much character depth or personality I should create, without overloading it, but I can work on that. Alot of what your saying is in the dialogue, so should I reduce the dialogue and go for more of a showing, to get the character depth an personailty?

I'm VM Belwynd—Army vet, farm kid, and lifelong fantasy reader. Raised on McCaffrey, Salvatore, and Greenwood; discovered harem stories through Saileri and Burke. Now with kids out of the house, I'm writing the progression fantasy I've dreamed of for years: deep bonds, real growth, worlds built...

Looking for some feedback on my story, positive or negative, I have no problems with criticism. I currently have 7 chapters, one being a prologue. For my current Arc, I plan about 27-30 chapters, and besides the 7 currently written, have another 8 stubbed out. I am mostly looking for feedback on...

You do know that you can change that under the Style Guides in ProWriting Aid, if you don't like it. It is under the Inclusive Language. But there are whole lot of settings there to adjust what and how it corrects.

thanks for the feedback, I have been using the ai in ProWritingAid to help rewrite some things. I will try to use it less.

I am a first time author, and would like some feedback on my book and writing style. I currently have 7 chapters, but 1 is prologue and another is interlude, so technically only 5. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2012312/the-copper-realms-cycle-verdigris--heartharas-champion/