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  1. TheSystemlessOne

    Hoshi's Feedback thread

    It’s probably because this is my first fiction and most of the choices I made were simply to get noticed... (You have already given xD.. maybe Chinese mc in cover page but hey.. his eyes are open). The world I’m building is designed to make use of everything, since my MC isn’t reincarnated...
  2. TheSystemlessOne

    Hoshi's Feedback thread

    Hello! My story is a LitRPG inspired by nostalgic MMORPGs, mixed with improvisation and a bit of wild imagination. Hopefully it’s something you’ll enjoy xD https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2009819/immortals-conflict/ I’m really looking forward to any feedback. Thanks!
  3. TheSystemlessOne

    Need some feedbacks on my novel! Do comment and tell, Thanks :)

    Finally giving the priest class justice. You’re welcome. This is a VRMMO/GameLit story where healers aren’t background characters. Currently at 71k+ words uploaded, so there’s plenty to judge me on. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2009819/immortals-conflict/ A healer looked at the...
  4. TheSystemlessOne

    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2009819/immortals-conflict/ I just hope u like LitRPG ... It may seem somewhat familiar in the beginning but it definitely finds its own identity as it goes on. And also its my first original fiction.
  5. TheSystemlessOne

    Looking for honest feedback on my novel. (LitRPG)

    I’m genuinely looking for honest feedback on my novel. I’ve already uploaded around 55k words but I still can’t tell whether it’s good or needs improvement. Most readers don’t really express their thoughts and writing without feedback's feel a bit underwhelming. I’ve also tried asking for...
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