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    This is my very first chapter, need feedback if it’s good

    Miotas :) Yeah, my writing is a work in progress. I'm trying to get better at describing what the surroundings of the MC are. It's definitely a work in progress.
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    Should I continue writing poems like these?

    That was an amazing poem. All that was lost...wow, that was unexpected. Amazing
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    This is my very first chapter, need feedback if it’s good

    BEEP BEEP BEEP* 'Nooooooo' I complain to myself after waking up to such a horrific sound. Covering myself with my purple blanket, I close my eyes while grumbling about how important sleep is. *BEEP BEEP BEEP* *Sigh* Finally getting out of my bed, I turn off my alarm and look at myself in the...
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