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Didn't expect that last bit of the chapter. It's a good setup and character building for what's to come and it's interesting. Thou for me it felt a little rushed. Having the later part as a stand alone chapter and showing more interaction between the characters would have given more impact. But...

I didn't notice i'll have a look at it..

Hey Vhail, it's a good start and it got me interested. the premise is good, not to much detail but enough to let you imagine the surrounding.