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I appreciate the honesty. ****! Crap! Now I'll have to write the whole book over. You want to know what really sucks? I have about 50 of these things, almost all with the identical prompt. The one you like is an early one. It's sort of like the AI said, "Oh! You don't like it, huh...

Without knowing anything about the book. Which one of the four gets your attention the most? If you legitimately hate them all, that's fine too. I'd rather know now than before I push the book up and even my Mom won't click on it.

Good coincidence is OK-ish with consequences or foreshadowing. In the original post, if the woman taught the guy how to fight, but deliberately did a lousy job to set him up for failure, that might be interesting. He learns 90% of fighting and then the remaining 10% after he has an "AUGH...

Research. I have no idea what life was like in 18th-century Tuscany. Apparently, there was a rivalry with Venice. Who knew? Also, physics.... Me: So the dude puts a keg of gunpowder next to the wall, lights it, and runs off. How much wall does he take out? AI: A keg?!?! On a thin...

I like that your synopsis is short. Maybe: Prince Altan Zafer, the weakest heir of the Empire, stood on the brink of death as his brother moved to seize the throne. Altan was crushed within moments. In his fury, he called upon the prophetic visions that had haunted his dreams. When death was...

I'm not a poet so I can't evaluate that. For the cover, it looks cool when my face is very close to the screen and I imagine it looks cool full size. Take a few steps back and you'll see that the dude blends in with the flag. Too much black. On the other hand the title is easy to read, so +5...

Just write a sentence for what's supposed to happen in each chapter. You'll need about 10% to 15% more sentences than you have chapters because some of your ideas might not work as well as you originally thought and you'll have to skip them. Just one sentence. The chapters should be...