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    Feedback for my sci-fi novel « Project: Aegis »

    I’ve wrote my first sci-fi novel and I’d appreciate some feedback. Project: AEGIS
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    Plot ideas?

    Hello! I wrote a mecha, sci-fi story involving humanity fighting against an almost conscious AI. It contains (or will contain) mech battles, geopolitical aspects and relationships. I’m just wondering if anyone has any ideas on I should continue the plot, if you have any plot twist ideas or...
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    First novel, would like some feedback on what I should improve.

    I agree, I’ll try and make things less repeated. Thank you.
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    First novel, would like some feedback on what I should improve.

    Alright thank you, I’ll take that into account, I really don’t want it to feel like a plain litrpg, I'm aiming more for a Danmachi vibe but with less cringe. I’m trying to spice up things right now.
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    First novel, would like some feedback on what I should improve.

    It's not that bad is it?
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    First novel, would like some feedback on what I should improve.

    Hello, I posted ten chapters of my first novel and planning to do more but I’d like some advice on the current chapters. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1781627/rogue-blade/ First thing I do notice is that the story is kinda fast paced, at least some chapters. Thanks in advance.
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