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Thanks a lot for taking the time to read and write such a detailed review—I really appreciate it. You’re right about the tone inconsistency; that’s something I need to be more deliberate about in revision. I’ve also skipped or compressed some important plot and system details in this draft...

I’m a new author and plan to revise my story before moving forward. I’m open to honest feedback, so feel free to be blunt. Fellow writers, I’d especially appreciate advice on how to improve any issues you notice. The title and cover will be updated as well. {15 day time period.} Area of advice-...

I’m a new author and plan to revise my story before moving forward. I’m open to honest feedback, so feel free to be blunt. Fellow writers, I’d especially appreciate advice on how to improve any issues you notice. The title and cover will be updated as well. {15 day time period.}...

I'd recommend somewhere between 900-2,500 word chapters. That totally depends on you. If you are capable of writing 2000 words chapter and still be consistent with posting. If not write shorter chapter like 900 to 1200 words. The key things is whether you post consistently or not.

We’re not naturally good, bad, or cringe—we’re naturally programmable. Biology gives us the starter kit; experience and choices write the code.

young protagonists authentically undergo dramatic worldview shifts through their arcs, while older mentor figures or antagonists would realistically maintain consistent value systems. A 20-year-old character experiencing their magical awakening could believably transform from selfish to...

There no such thing as being naturally Good or bad. In the process of growing up we learn things from parents, relatives and all the adults in our life. If a child is being rewarded for doing selfish things {Bribing for basic behavior: Parents who offer treats or rewards to children simply for...

I will try to point out some basic mistake which i observed and it's not about how it's written is about what are you writing. Note - english is not my first language i may have made mistakes. Apologizing in advance. Shawn opened the fridge. The fridge was filled with vegetables, snacks...

Since I am also new here's what I did since I faced a similar situation. I took a chapter from a book I liked and spend hours dissecting how the chapters were written. How the sentence flows, where emotions were added( it changes highly depending on genre). You are trying to imitate...

Hi, I’m a new author. I’ve posted 19 chapters and received 2.1k views in 24 days. Valid reads 572 I’m not sure whether that’s good or bad. Could someone give me feedback on it?