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    Does my Deuteragonist have enough aura?

    This makes it much, MUCH better
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    SUPER-DUPER IMPORTANT QUESTION

    I'm launching an isekai at the end of the week, but its 100% western style prose. For me, the reason was as simple as this: if I tried to copy Japanese style, without my thoughts actually being organized into a Japanese lexicon, it would look 'fake and gay', as my nephew might say.
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    Adventure/Fantasy-story writers, how do you keep travel sequences interesting?

    Depending on the tone of your story, this works great. However, if it's heavily character driven, you can treat it like a bottle episode. Its a great chance to explore your characters relationships and psyche, either through comedic road trip shenanigans or concerted introspection.
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    Sudden drop in views, Is this normal?

    Yes! Shit, I'm glad its not just me. I was averaged around 1200 then all the sudden dropped to like 700? I think its something up with SH's backend, I've noticed sometimes I'll post a chap, have favorites and comments, but no views somehow.
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    NATIONAL HORNY DAY

    You've been makin' a lot of horny posts for a guy who doesn't even write smut. I, for one, appreciate the suppport :)
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    A Professional Inappropriate Question

    Not the last though, my Grim Works shall live forever
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    A Professional Inappropriate Question

    Oh, definitely give your characters distinct prefernences, fetishes, endurance levels. Have the perspective character realize what those are and play with them.
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    A Professional Inappropriate Question

    Smut helps! Idk, i get all their stuff off Rule34, and its not like I check often lol that said don't write smut unless you want to, people will be able to tell
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    A Professional Inappropriate Question

    Hell yeah! One of the very few that puts some work into the context, then follows through with some truly excellent fuckin'.
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    A Professional Inappropriate Question

    For this particular story? The tentacle monster is a kissless virgin with bestial instincts, and his girlfriend is a tentacle fetishist who wants him to try and wear her like a finger puppet, damn the consequences. For their first time, his best friend's psychic girlfriend rides along in his...
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    A Professional Inappropriate Question

    I mean, there's the old fallback of watching porn, Nyl2 is the best artist out there for that, my MC's sexual persona is very similar to their character from A Generous Donation. Other than that, you more or less just modify a male perspective. Alongside a male focus on physicality, make sure to...
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    Something that is written very elegantly.

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1667726/amaranthine/ I'm the greatest author who ever lived, proof is above.
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    I’ll Critique Your First Chapter’s Hook (Honest Feedback)

    Yo! Looking for this kind of feedback on a story I'm launching next month (have 60k words, just getting a bigger backlog for early daily releases.) Trying to decide if I should keep the prologue, or if the first chapter is stronger. Issue is this isnt smut, so i don't want scare people off with...
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    What do I need to do to draw in readers?

    Sci fi and romance are super popular, your numbers on your first book weren't bad, do what I said with merging them, stay consistent, and I think you'll do fine.
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    What do I need to do to draw in readers?

    Delete your second book and keep posting under your first story if its a continuation. Starting new works sacrifices most of the progress your first made. My story has 3 books so far, but they're all under the same banner.
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    How traumatized is your main character?

    0/10 she does trauma at others
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    Favorite Video

    The queeeeeeeen! That subtle accent too, *chef's kiss*. The GOAT for me was HeatherFeather, but she disappeared forever ago.
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    Favorite Video

    Thanks for this recommendation, just listened to three 'Not a Cow's in a row while making Sims for my cast lol absolutely fantastic!
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    Favorite Video

    I just found her yesterday on TheWhiteRabbit's own alien abduction series! Idk what it says about the ASMR community that we as a whole seem to find it very comforting to be kidnapped and examined.
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    Favorite Video

    OMG right! The production value, the cozy vibes, the fact she's one of the single most beautiful people on the planet? Ugh, easily my strongest parasocial relationship. Her Stranger at the Station vid should be shown in fucking theaters, it isn't ASMR, it's art!
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