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Thank you, that's actually wonderfully helpful. I feel like i get a decent amount of clicks that stop there, but i've also been told that my writing within the story is decent. Finding specifics on WHY my synopsis is off-putting is wonderful.

Probably won't! That's the whole point of throwing myself into the fire. I try to remind myself that just like everyone likes different music, everyone likes different stories and writing styles, and just because my story isn't someone's cup of tea doesn't mean that it couldn't be someone...

I feel like this is a bad plan, but I've had a pretty decent mix of both good and bad feedback, and so why not? My first comment is to not go into my story expecting a webnovel, I am writing a traditional novel and just sharing it on a few sites because I've never written before. :)

Excuse my language but, Holy shit. Damn, i was not prepared in any way for that, nailed me to the wall for all to see. :blob_joy: I expected more about my writing in general, and the fact that you called me an intermediate writer is actually flattering. So I will take that as a compliment on...

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The most thorough and wonderful feedback i have gotten so far! I've never heard "purple prose" (again, new to writing!) but I understand what you're saying. That first chapter I really wanted to lay into detail, I have been told it was a bit much, and so I started taking away just a bit. I...

Hello! You did a small read for me a while back, when I only had two chapters posted. I have 6 up now! I have made small edits, and someone from another site gave me some grammatical edits as well. I would love it if you could check it out again, maybe the next few chapters? I've been told my...

I've only got 6 chapters up, and I'm new to this. Would love to learn and grow! My first warning is that I did plan on writing a traditional novel and not a webnovel - but I have never written before, so I joined these sites to get help! (I've been told quite a few times that my writing feels...

Art is art, in my opinion. You could tag it with trigger warnings, but I think in the end, if it is the story you want to tell, it's the story you want to tell.

BOTH. Romantasy wins. And if you want one that's just being started... Link in Signature :blobthumbsup:

She'd be confused and angry. Angry because, "What the fuck do you mean i haven't been making my own decisions?"

My protagonist doesn't even really want all this, she just wants to live her life, ok? This is a lot all at once.

On another note - your cover art is GORGEOUS. Beautiful contrast of colors and detail.

Hello Gabrielle, First - hope you're having a great day. My choice today was Chai Tea, but I do typically have a basic vanilla latte most days when my toddler allows me to drink it without it going cold. Would love to throw myself into the ring - I'm a brand new writer who's never attempted...

Leora is a 21-year-old girl interested in gardening, plants, and medicinal properties. She's a bit emotional and disregulated, and while that affects her relationships and decisions at times (whoops, I said the thing because I was angry), she is strong-willed, determined, and extremely caring...

Thank you so much! I am writing a more traditional novel, but with no experience, I thought that posting places like this would be a good way to learn. I thought I was rushing the story too much, but maybe I slowed it down too much when worrying about rushing it! I am still working on a rewrite...

Here's my first ever attempt! Also an amateur, but i'm enjoying myself soooo much. Feel free to let me know what you think! My coworkers are dying to read it and are extremely upset i'm letting total strangers read it and not them - but something about being anonymous here is just safer...

My signature is a link - is it not an appropriate link? :blob_teary: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1532411-divided/chapter/1577669/ Also - it IS amateur hour over here, at all hours. I'm new to all of this :blob_facepalm: